LeafStreak

[WolfMoon]

Name: LeafStreak

Gender:shegat

Age: 14 moons

General Appearance: Skinny, green, and small pawed

Pelt Color: green tabby that gets lighter on her muzzle and chest and darker on her ears

Eye Color: emerald green

Rank: Warrior

Mentor/Apprentice: none

Wanted Mentor/Apprentice: Daggerkit

History: Born the color of a leaf, LeafStreak stood out in her litter next to EndlessSteps her brother who is purple. LeafStreak had a hard time paying attention to SongStar since she was very hyper. After she got a reality check for SongStar she paid attention and is now a full fledged warrior, and is proud to be one.

Marks/Scars: green strips

Gazer Potential~~~
~Spotter: 3
~Scripter:3
~Seeker: 1

<3:
1-fighting
2-snow
3-plaaying with her siblings
4-exploring
5-going to the gatherings

</3:
1-medicine
2-pushy cats
3-fog
4-going hungry
5-any rogues

Kin: Mate:looking
Dad:CheineySweep
Mom: GoldenHeart
Sblings:Lionkit, Endlesskit, Mothkit, Leafkit, Nutkit, Swiftkit, Acornkit
Other:none

Picture:

Song: (Optionary. Leave this blank if you cant find a song that suits your cat. If you CAN find a song that suits your cat, leave a link to it here, so that other members can acess it. Try looking on YouTube for your song. YOU CAN ONLY PICK ONE.)

[Willowishness]

1.) Her history is all wrong; you have her description there. You have to tell us what's happened to her since her birth under "history".
2.) Not enough description anywhere. Instead of a simple "green" for her pelt color, you could say something like "green tabby that gets lighter on her muzzle and chest and darker on her ears".
3.) I hardly think eating and sleeping count as things she loves. Could you think about her personality and replace those two <3's with something else that's more... creative?

After you do those things, the bio will be accepted.